THE GRAPH SHOWS THE INCOME OF FOUR CAFE IN NEW YORK OVER LAST YEAR

The line graph demonstrates the earnings of four

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of cafes in New York over the

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whereas

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the

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was plummeted

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, both

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express, wi-fi

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and

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cool

was sharply increase

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over the period. In January, the

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begins at the highest income at about 160,000 dollars.

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, right after that,

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type of

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witnessed a dramatic fluctuation. It reached a peak of almost 180,000 dollars in March. From October to the end of the

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, the

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was not the trend of people so it dramatically went down and dropped to

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lowest point at $50,000. In contrary to the

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type, we can see the development of three types remaining. In the first month of the

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, Internet Express had the best income with $100,000. It varied insignificantly and ended the

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with $140,000. Wifi

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a little bit lower when they began,

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, we can experience a shoot up from $50,000 to $190,000 and become the most popular

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of the given

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. The final one,

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Cool hit the highest point of $120,000 in December.