Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It has controversial TV
commercials
are convince someone to buy goods and services. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others believe Linking Words
commercials
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. But there are many reasons for Correct pronoun usage
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this
kind of behaviour of Linking Words
consumers
. There is more to discuss in the following paragraphs.
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To begin
with, It can be seen Linking Words
advertizing
is popping up in every digital and printed media Correct your spelling
advertising
such
as paper, TV, Radio, Social media and many more digital billboards. Linking Words
This
interrupts the buying behaviour of the consumer. Linking Words
While
dominance in social media has led to the wide spread of Linking Words
commercials
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, it was not the only factor influencing the changes in Linking Words
this
circumstance. Economy, Education and cultural background are directly convinced to the flok. It was an ordinary trait of humans. Linking Words
Therefore
it is positive that Linking Words
commercials
are not the only thing to change the pattern of consumption.
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Moreover
, With the revolution of the digital era mobile phones, tabs are fully occupied with the necessary equipment and applications. Linking Words
While
the internet is facilitated uninterrupted and fast Meanwhile marketing is not the only way to persuade customers because continuous messages and fake calls annoy Linking Words
consumers
. Sometimes it is not important or not interested in the economy or the culture. Meanwhile, Some organizations use Use synonyms
commercials
for cheating by advertising fake goods or services, Use synonyms
For instance
, Showing good quality products or services, but sending customers low-quality cheap goods. Linking Words
Thus
customers feel frustrated and disappointed.
In conclusion, It's clear even though the stakeholders or the manufacturers Linking Words
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are convinced
consumers
. There are many things to make decisions. Use synonyms
Obticous
advertisements do not influence or convince Correct your spelling
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consumers
. If it is true Use synonyms
consumers
will ignore the advertisement.Use synonyms
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