68.The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph illustrates the distribution of monetary support in three aspects in 1974 and 2014,
while
the table shows the amount of financial aid that the countries received in the same years.
Overall
, in 1975, the distribution of the money was mainly used in medicine aspects, while
in 2014 was in finance, and all countries received more financial aid in 1974 than in 2014.
In 1974, 80 million
of the money was spent on medicine, in the next 40 years the amount decreased by 20 million
, to 60 million
, while
catering had the biggest change, in the first year 70 million
was used in this
field, but in 2014, it dropped dramatically to 15 million
. Furthermore
, financial aspects varied moderately, from 70 million
to 65 million
in 1974 and 2014 respectively.
All countries received higher financial help in 1974 than in 2014, China had the biggest difference, in 1974, they received 62 million
, but this
went down steadily to only 6 million
in 2014. Thailand had a difference of 30 million
, it dropped from 48 million
to 18 million
, while
Indonesia only dropped by 15 million
, from 55 million
in 1974 to 30 million
in 2014. Finally
, South Africa received the highest financial aid in both years, with 65 million
in 1974 and 42 million
in 2014.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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