68.The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperature
in different cities and the table shows the hours
of sunshine
in these cities in one year.
Overall
, London
and New York
have similar variations in temperature
, while
Sydney’s monthly temperature
is different. Another significant feature is that London
's sunshine
hours
are the shortest.
The months from June to August are summer in London
and New York
, with 20ºC
to 22.5ºC
in London
and approximately 27.5ºC
in New York
, while
in Sydney is winter, in which the temperature
varies between 15ºC
and 17.5ºC
. Furthermore
, December, January and February are winters in New York
, where the temperature
varies between 4ºC
and 6ºC
, in London
, the temperature
is a little bit higher, from 6ºC
to 10ºC
. Sydney's summer season temperature
is higher than the other mentioned cities with 26ºC
to 30ºC
.
New York
has the largest annual sunshine
hours
, with 2633 hours
, which is approximately 100 hours
more than Sydney, which has 2520. Finally
, London
’s sunshine
hours
are less than half of Sydney’s , with 1196 hours
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