71.The map shows a popular tourists destination in a city in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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Both maps display a city, before and after it was developed in 2000 and 2010. The city is small and has a river in the north. Over the period, the city was completely transformed with the addition of a hotel and parking,

however

, there are several things that have remained unchanged. The most noticeable addition is the hotel rooms, it is situated next to the heritage railway, with a parking at the north of it. In 2010, the toilet remained in the same place as it was in 2000, but between the toilet and the road, a cafe was developed. A large guardrail has been added along the river avoiding any accident that could happen,

also

in 2000 there were only a few trees, but during the ten years more trees have been grown, the

last

change that has been developed is the gift shop near the forests has been changed to a sculpture.

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