81.Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that some individuals think that society needs to be based on
rules
and laws
. This
essay completely agrees with this
statement because laws
and rules
can establish order and resolve conflicts.
The government should establish order and safety for its members, in this
way, they can know what is acceptable and what is not. Then
, without laws
and orders, people
will do whatever they want, and the city will be messy, with everyone doing what they want, and police and other people
will not be able to arrest individuals since without laws
people
can do whatever they want. For instance
, in China, years before, the roads were a mess, because even though there were traffic lights, people
passed through them even though they were not allowed, and this
caused many traffic accidents, and was not till recent years that they changed some laws
related to roads.
Laws
provide a framework that allows individuals to coexist harmoniously and resolve in a fair and just manner. This
is because if there are no laws
or rules
, people
are not willing to listen to others, since they will think that they are the ones that have the reason, and this
will cause a long-term conflict. So following the rules
and laws
people
will know which one is the one that did it wrong and following the orders, citizens will not doubt the decision made. For example
, property laws
protect individuals’ rights to own and use their possessions, ensuring a sense of security and preventing conflict over the property.
In conclusion, rules
and laws
help everything work in the right way, so accidents and other catastrophes do not happen, and also
allow people
to live harmoniously and solve problems, I, therefore
, believe that society should based on laws
and rules
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