The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

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The diagram illustrates the percentage of total urban occupants in four different countries namely; the Philippines,

Malaysia

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Thailand

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, and

Indonesia

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from 1970 to 2020

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the prediction for the population from 2020 to 2040.

Overall

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, the number of people who live in cities for all mentioned countries increased,

also

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, the figure predicts that

this

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increasing trend continue until 2040. In 1970,

Indonesia

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had the lowest chunk of city dwellers which was roughly 15 per cent,

while

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, the Philippines and

Malaysia

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had the highest which was nearly 30 per cent. It is predicted that by the year 2040, the proportion of people who will live in cities of

Malaysia

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will be the highest among all,

additionally

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, these statistics will be the lowest for

Thailand

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. In 2020, the bonus of city inhabitants is reported 30%, 45%, 50%, and over 80% for

Thailand

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, the Philippines,

Indonesia

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, and

Malaysia

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respectively. The trend of

Indonesia

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Thailand

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, and

Malaysia

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has almost no fluctuation,

however

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, the rate of city residents increased from 31 to around 50 from 1970 to 1990

then

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decreased to nearly 42 by the year 2010 and

finally

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started to grow from 2010 to 2040.

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

It has been suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, the government emphasizes economic development above all other concerns. The benefits of this are it increases the annual income of the general public, and improves the infrastructure of a country.

Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For some people, shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but is a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?