Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: - Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school - Explain why you are interested in the position - Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

Dear Mathew, I am writing
this
to apply for a volunteer position in your
school
. First of all, my name is Adam Smith and I am staying in Southern Street which is about 10 minutes walkable distance from
school
. And I am the father of two children who are studying 3rd and 5th standard in your
school
with names "Jooly" and "Antony". Currently, I am doing my office work remotely and I wanted to spend some time on outdoor activities. Specifically, I am interested in playing with children and spending time with them.
Moreover
,
due to
my busy schedule, I have not given more time for my kids to interact perhaps, they might be happy if they see me in
school
at least once a week.
Lastly
, you might have a doubt about my experience in
this
role.
For instance
,
Last
year, I acted as a volunteer at "ABC
School
"
along with
my children for an Essay competition activity and that was a success.
Therefore
, I am very much confident about
this
role. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Adam Smith
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task response
Ensure the letter fully addresses all aspects of the task, including clear details about relevant experience and reasons for wanting to volunteer at the school.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure and coherence are generally good, but ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea for better cohesion.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used, particularly in expressing reasons for wanting to volunteer and describing relevant experience with children.
grammatical range
Ensure the accurate use of grammar and expand the variety of sentence structures used to demonstrate a strong command of English language.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dedicated volunteer
  • Community engagement
  • Positive impact
  • Youth mentorship
  • Skills development
  • Educational journey
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Meaningful contribution
  • Enriching experiences
  • Collaborative spirit
  • Flexibility and adaptability
  • Child welfare and safety
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