The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
The table illustrates the types of advertising that
spent
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were spent
in
four car companies, including Change preposition
by
Renault
, Rover
, Vauxhall
and Cetirzine in United
Kingdom in the year 2002.
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the United
This
table provide
the expenditure Change the verb form
provides
in
types of advertising on press, cinema, outdoor, radio and TV. Change preposition
on
It is clear that
Renault
company spent the highest amount of money in
advertising. Press advertisement seems the most preferable among Change preposition
on
other advertisement
, whilst cinema was Change the wording
another advertisement
other advertisements
prefered
least.
In terms of press, the Correct your spelling
preferred
most
highest spent was Change the adjective
apply
Renault
(45 millions
), followed by Change to singular
million
Rover
(38 millions
), Certirzine (12 Change to singular
million
millions
) and Change to singular
million
Vauxhall
(8 millions
). Change to singular
million
However
, in
TV Change preposition
on
advertise
, Certirzine spent the greatest which is 70 Change the form of the verb
advertising
millions
and the lowest was Change to singular
million
Rover
which is 45 millions
. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, Renault
and Vauxhall
spent on cinema 6 millions
and 5 Change to singular
million
millions
, respectively, Change to singular
million
while
the remaining companies was
not used.
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were
Nevertheless
, all
of company spent 15 Correct determiner usage
the
millions
which is the same amount Change to singular
million
in
Radio Change preposition
on
advertisement
. Replace the word
advertising
In addition
, 7 millions
was used Change to singular
million
in
Change preposition
apply
outdoor
in Replace the word
outdoors
Renault
and Vauxhall
, while
Certirzine and Rover
used 3 millions
and 2 Change to singular
million
millions
, respectively.Change to singular
million
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