The graph below shows the number of shops that closed in the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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about

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the

amount

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number

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of new

shops

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and

shops

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that have been closed in a country

during

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from

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2011 until 2018.

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, the number of

shops

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, either

it is

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closed or opened

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mostly

fluctuating

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throughout the

period

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given.

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, more

shops

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are opened during the starting

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, which is 2011, whilst

at the end

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of

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period

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shown that shop closures became the majority. In regard to

year

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the year

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of

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2011, almost 9000

of

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shops

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are opening before it falls dramatically to 4000 in the exact next year.

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shops closure

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shop closures

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are

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less dramatic

which

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started

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at more than 6000 and slightly

drop

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to 6000

n

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in

2012. New

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began to rebound again for almost two years until 2014 by around 6000

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and

suprassed

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surpassed

suppressed

the closed

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even though it faced a

slightly

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drop to 4000, which is the same exact amount as in 2012. The same goes

with

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the

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shop

closure

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closures

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, it began to rapidly decrease and drop

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the lowest point for almost none of

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shops

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the shops

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are

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closing in 2015. After 2015, the number of closing

shops

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surge

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surged

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sharply and reached above 5000

shops

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and

remain

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constant until the end of

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period

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given. Meanwhile, opening

shops

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remain

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remained

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stable only until 2017

for

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4000 and started to decline

at

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3000 in 2018.