The charts below give the information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city of Scotland in 2010

The charts below give the information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city of Scotland in 2010
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The graph illustrates the percentage of three education levels by age range in Glasgow in 2010.
Overall
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, university
degrees
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accounted for the biggest part of the groups of people who were from 16 to 75
years
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old. Meanwhile, almost all elderly inhabitants in
this
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city who were over 75
years
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old had no qualifications. The proportion of university
degrees
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held by adults who were from 24 to 35
years
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old far exceeded that of the
school
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certificate
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and no qualifications, with respective numbers being 76%, 15% and 9%. A similar pattern can be seen in the group of residents who were from 50 to 75
years
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old, in which half of them obtained a college diploma
whereas
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20% acquired a
school
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certificate
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and 9% did not get any
degrees
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. The figures for the groups of adolescents (from 16 to 24
years
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old) and adults (from 35 to 50
years
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old) were completely the same with university
degrees
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being 71%, followed by the
school
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certificate
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at 20% and no qualifications at 9%.
Conversely
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, 72% of seniors living in Glasgow did not earn any diplomas, compared to 25% with a college degree and 3% with a
school
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certificate
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees, years, school, certificate with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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