In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
In the technology-focused world, humans might be forced to pay with electronic
cards
or via smartphones and there would be no need to pay by cash
. However
, it may be neglected by some groups because of some reasons.
Firstly
, the majority of people
believe that paying for things by card or smartphone is better than using cash
; in terms of keeping. Since money
requires protection for a longer time and exchanges between people
in communities, it damages and puts a burden on the national economy so it is advisable to eliminate using the cash
and substitute it with electronic payment. A second factor is publishing bills that states have logged more trees for printing money
, thus
causing deforestation therefore
, nations and governments prefer to change their attitudes about bills and cash
and try to use credit cards
and smartphone applications instead
. Because the basic requirement for making money
is wood. For instance
, cutting a tree tends to destroy the environment but the card is made from renewable sources.
However
, opponents of using electronic applications do not like to give up using money
. They are old people
who do not know how to use credit cards
or phones, and they prefer to utilize cash
to buy things. In other words
, they do not have any literacy to use them. Moreover
, support for using cash
refers to the internet and electronic bugs that may occur while
using modern payment devices. That is
to say, if the net is cut, people
can not buy things in stores and elsewhere
.
To conclude
, it seems to me that, buying by card or phone is essential because of environmental and economic matters, although
some people
believe the traditional way is safer and the internet problems may affect credit cards
and smartphones.Submitted by TUTOO on
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