The graph shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over in major developed countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people aged 65 years and over living in seven developed

countries

from 1950 and the prediction

in

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for

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the future until 2050.

Overall

, Japan,

Germany

, and

Rusia

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Russia

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have

significant

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a significant

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increase

at the end

of the period,

while

the rest of the

countries

listed generally have a slight increase. In 1950, the population aged 65 and over in

Germany

, Japan, and

Korea

was less than 10%. The number generally increased in these

countries

, but

Korea

underwent a slight

fell

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in 1970,

while

it fell in

Germany

in 1990. Japan underwent a dramatic

increased

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increase

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surpassing

Germany

in 2000, and

this

upward trend is predicted to happen until 2050 with the

proportion

almost

reach

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40%.

In addition

,

Korea

underwent a significant

increased

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increase

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from 1990 surpassing several

countries

and

predicted

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to stand

on

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in

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the

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apply

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second place in 2050 with 35% population, followed by

Germany

with

the

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proportion

slightly less than that of

Korea

.

On the other hand

, the

proportion

in

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the U.S

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U.S

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U.S.

, France, Australia, and China was less than 15% in 1950. The trend in France was increasing and

predicted

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to end

with

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at

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around 25% in 2050. Meanwhile, the

proportion

in

U.S

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U.S.

, Australia, and China was generally increased with a slight

fell

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fall

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in some

year

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years

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and predicted to reach less than 28% in 2050.