your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he or she is doing about celebrating Nes Year in different countries. write a letter to your friend. in your letter write a letter to your friend.in your letter : 1 say how important new year is to people in your country . 2describe now new year is celebrated in your country . 3 explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your countey.
Dear Safia:
I hope my letter finds you in good health,how are you doing with your
study
? long time Fix the agreement mistake
studies
we
hadCorrect word choice
since we
caugh-up
since my Correct your spelling
caught up
last
Linking Words
my
birthday.I have recently received your email about your help in Correct pronoun usage
apply
celebration
New Replace the word
celebrating
Year
in my country for your college project.
My society Use synonyms
have
been waiting New Change the verb form
has
Year
with Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a hard-breath
hard-breath
.hoping for new wishes and dreams,In addition,Correct your spelling
hard breath
seeking
forgiveness from God and their surrounding -people Change preposition
to seeking
Of
their mistakes and faults.Change preposition
For
Also
Linking Words
gratitude
and Thankful Replace the word
they are grateful
of
all Change preposition
for
Correct article usage
the blessing
blessing
they have .
Before Fix the agreement mistake
blessings
couple
Correct article usage
a couple
days
of New Change preposition
of days
Year
, all my Use synonyms
neighbourhood
Fix the agreement mistake
neighbourhoods
are
collaborate to clean and Unnecessary verb
apply
lighting
the streets, Wrong verb form
light
Correct word choice
and decoration
decoration
the celebration venue where the celebration will be. In the evening of Replace the word
decorate
Linking Words
last
day of the Correct article usage
the last
year
prior new one.All members of families dress Use synonyms
new
attire and Change preposition
in new
gathering
togetherReplace the word
gather
include
, Verb problem
apply
grandparents
, parents and children Change preposition
including grandparents
.they
recall the happiest Correct your spelling
They
memory
, Fix the agreement mistake
memories
telling
stories and give advice for planning their goals and targets .After that, they have a lunch from Wrong verb form
tell
a
big meal and Correct article usage
apply
singing
until the Sun Wrong verb form
sing
rise
Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
of
the new Change preposition
in
year
.Because of Use synonyms
the
things, I do like Correct determiner usage
these
to begin
my New Linking Words
Year
beside my family and neighbours.
Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
wishing for
you the happiest New Wrong verb form
I wish
Year
with your Use synonyms
loving
and Replace the word
love
includes
a lot of success and achievements and I would like Verb problem
apply
to
celebrate with me Correct pronoun usage
you to
this
Linking Words
year
.
Sincerely yours.Use synonyms
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structure
Work on organizing your ideas in a clearer structure. The letter lacks a proper introduction, body, and conclusion.
tone
Use appropriate greetings and closings in your letter to your friend. It is important to maintain the right tone and formality in a letter.
coherence
The letter lacks a single central idea per paragraph. Work on expressing your ideas in separate, coherent paragraphs.
response
Ensure that you address all points mentioned in the prompt with sufficient detail. Add more specific information about the New Year celebrations in your country and your personal preferences.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.