The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the number of obese

children

are

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rising day by day.

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western society

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an increase in the number of overweight

children

by almost 20%, in the past decade.

This

essay will look at the core reasons for

this

and propose some solid solutions. One of the main

cause

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of the

problem

is that

children

prefer junk food over a healthy meal.

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can weaken their body and produce fats which lead them to be obese and

this

overweightness can cause many problems in their life.

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, an obese child cannot

take

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participate in athletic activities and

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to some other places. The solution is for the

government

to raise taxes on these types

food

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or restrict or ban these products. Another

problem

is

that

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the ignorance of

parents

. In

this

world

parents

are the best supervisors of their

children

. To explore

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idea I mean that,

parents

nowadays do not supervise the

foods

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of their

children

due to

their busy schedule and

children

are not mature enough to think what is good for their

heath

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and what is bad. The way forward could be to punish the

parents

of obese

children

, so they can take better care

for

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their

children

afterward. A third cause of the

problem

is that it can be obese

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. Most

of

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children

are obese because their

parents

or one of them are obese and

this

obesity in the child

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throught

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through

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genitical

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genetical

process.

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study shows that over 60% of obese

children

in Pakistan are

genetical

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genetically

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or say obese by birth. To tackle

this

issue,

government

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the government

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could open physical

activities

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centres all over the country for obese

children

to do physical activities which would make them fit and active.

To sum up

, obesity is causing many problems in the life of those who suffer

this

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,

due to

the

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reasons

such

as eating junk foods, lack of

guardians supervisions

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and genetical.

This

is a serious

problem

, and unless

government

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and

parents

do not take

step

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forward in

this

issue, the

children

will suffer till death. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the

problem

lies with

parents

and the

government

.