The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many
shops
were closed and opened in a single country from 2011 to 2018. Use synonyms
Overall
, there had been a significant Linking Words
decrease
in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shops
opening Use synonyms
on
the given period, Change preposition
in
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
closing Use synonyms
was slightly
Change the verb form
was slightly decreased
was slightly decreasing
decrease
.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shops
closing from 2011 to 2014 Use synonyms
ranging
around 6,000 and 7,000. In 2015, the figure underwent a significant Wrong verb form
ranged
decrease
and reached its lowest point at less than 1,000 before it bounced back and rose significantly in 2016 to 5,000 closures. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
remained stable until 2018.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, in 2011, the Linking Words
number
of stores opening stood at approximately 8,500 before it underwent a dramatic Use synonyms
decrease
in 2012 to 4,000. Use synonyms
Linking Words
However
the figure rose Add a comma
However,
up
to 6,000 openings in 2014 before Change preposition
apply
fell down
in 2015 and Wrong verb form
falling
reached
the same Wrong verb form
reaching
number
as in 2012. The Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
then
remained stable until 2017 before fell down to its lowest point at 3,000 in 2018.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, decrease, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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