Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two types of views in every society. Some individuals think that only financial advancement is important for

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and others do not accept the

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radical point of view. They believe that the prosperity of each community depends on all-round growth. Given that

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financial exchanges have been

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an influential factor in

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history, the first group presents its theory based on that.

Economy

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has a direct impact on every aspect of citizens life in all countries. poverty increases the rate of crimes and unethical behaviors and in opposite, wealth Improves morale and decreases crimes.

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, having a good and dynamic community, which is the final goal of all communities, depends on

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good

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.

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opinion,

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acknowledging the former opinion (one?), believes that development is a comprehensive process and

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to attend to all needs.

As a consequence

, they want progress in various other fields including culture, art, social and political sciences. It can be considered as a long-term investment and you can'

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expect immediate achievements from it since you distribute your time and energy in multiple subjects. In my opinion,

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has

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priority than others.

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property and if they can'

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provide

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resources the rate of sickness gets high as an outcome. Even in the matter of education if they can'

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prepare proper

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the scientific level is going to fall. So,

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make some strategies for making money and

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we can think about other

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. In conclusion, money plays a vital role in every community.

However

, we can'

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ignore cultural and social issues and we ought to have some plans for them, but I don'

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believe in equal importance. I think they should be considered

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their priority and of

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the money has a priority and requires more attention.