The graph shows the average monthly change in th prices of three metals during 2014.
The line chart illustrates the
percent
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per cent
difference
in monthly prices of three types of metals throughout 2014.
Overall
, the percent
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per cent
difference
in monthly price had experienced a marked decrease in two types of metals and others had slightly increased.
In detail, nickel, which is the highest percentage difference
at the beginning of the year
, had decreased dramatically from 6% to the lowest point of -3% in June, before finally
risen
gradually to 1% Wrong verb form
rising
at the end
of the year
. On the other hand
, there was a gradual fall in Copper’s price from 2% in January, remained constant at 1% in July to September, and then
slightly increased to around 1.8% in December.
However
, while
the other two types of metal had decreased in importance, the opposite was true in the case of Zinc. The percent
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per cent
difference
in monthly price stood at 1% at the beginning of the year
, before increased
to 2% Wrong verb form
increasing
at the end
of the year
. Zinc had reached a high of 3% in the second month, before decreased
gradually to -1% in the middle Wrong verb form
decreasing
year
and slightly increased to the end of the year
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