The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China, and the USA.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China, and the USA.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
The pie charts display the production of several citrus
fruits
in three countries
such
as
Brazil
, China, and the
USA
.
Overall
,
oranges
are the
the
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most produced in
Brazil
and
USA
,
while
the agriculture of
tangerines
makes up the most significant share in China. Other citrus
fruits
that are not specifically mentioned are the least produced in all three countries. As previously said, the biggest percentage in the cultivation of citrus fruit in
Brazil
is made up
by
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oranges
at 87%, leaving behind lemons and
tangerines
, both at around 5% and a minimal share of grapefruit and other citrus fruit
Similarly
, the production of
oranges
is
also
the most significant in the
USA
,
just
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followed by grapefruit at 16% and lemons with half the percentage of the latter. The rest
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made up
by
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Tangerines
and other citrus
fruits
Although
,
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tangerines
comprised just approximately 5
percent
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of the production of citrus
fruits
in the
USA
and
Brazil
, it's the most cultivated type in China (74%), and unlike in the
USA
and
Brazil
,
oranges
are the
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in
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with
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18%
percent
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share, double the proportion that the other three categories comprise together.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruits, brazil, usa, oranges, tangerines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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