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What are the advantages and disadvantages of self-employment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge of experience.

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In modern times, independent contracting has become an essential part of everyday life. There are those who say that working for oneself has enhanced our lives in various ways,
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 others feel that we are worse because of the issue in
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 essay I will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of entrepreneurship and provide my
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 opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that
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 offers greater" freedom than working for a company. A good illustration of
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 is that Apple is the only computer company which was founded by stave Jobs. Now it is becoming not only a computer company but
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 a mobile, tablet, and television -company through freedom. A
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 point in favour of proprietorship is someone can demonstrate higher earnings.
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, jobs have a limitation of salary it is fixed as per association policy.
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, the same person draws maximum money by making a profit. Despite these arguments, many people feel that working for oneself has drawbacks for a few reasons. The main reason why people think that
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 is an irregular income process.
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, Jobs can confirm every monthly or yearly salary and benefits which is a regular flow of money,
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, self-employment has responsibility for all aspects of the business,
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, as a self-employed person, you are responsible for marketing, accounting, finance, and customer service. In conclusion, it must be said that self-employment has pros and cons. It is dependent on your own knowledge, educational background, and experience to be considered Your own boss. Having considered both sides of the issue, I would say Free agent is an essential need in
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 era. We should start our own business as early as possible to contribute to our lovely country.

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When constructing your paragraphs, make sure each paragraph has a clear central idea, and the connection to the subsequent paragraph is logically structured through appropriate use of cohesive devices.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion should clearly address the task and summarize the main points. They should be distinct and concise to effectively frame the essay.
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Support the main points with more developed arguments or relevant examples where possible, to enhance the depth of the essay and make your position more compelling.
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Ensure the response fully addresses all parts of the task, giving a balanced view on the advantages and disadvantages, and a clear position throughout the essay.
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Aim for more comprehensive development of ideas in the main body paragraphs, avoiding superficial treatment of the topic that might result from trying to cover too many points in a limited space.
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Include specific examples to illustrate your points, ensuring they are directly relevant to the questions posed by the topic.
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