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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after it was refurbished. The charts shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after it was refurbished. The charts shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.
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The lower table depicts the
amount
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 of
visitors
 to Ashdown Museum during the period before and after it was
refubrished
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refurbished
, with the pie charts indicating whether they enjoyed their visit during the same period. In general, we can see from the data that after
refubrishment
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refurbishment
 the
amount
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number
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 of tourists rose significantly,
furthermore
 the proportion of tourists that were 'satisfied' and 'very satisfied'
inreased
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increased
 dramatically. It can be clearly seen that after
year
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the year
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 when
Museum
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the Museum
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 was
refubrished
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refurbished
 the percentage of dissatisfied
visitors
derceased
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decreased
deceased
 more than two times,
whereas
 the percentage of 'satisfied' tourists rose slightly
for
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 ten per
cent
. The figures were fifteen per
cent
 and
fourty
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forty
four
 per
cent
 respectively. Meanwhile, for 'very satisfied' guests the pattern appears slightly different. In
year
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 before
refubrishment
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refurbishment
 the rate accounts for
small
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a small
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 15 per
cent
, but after
refrefubrishment
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re refurbishment
 the figure increased to 35 per
cent
.
Additionally
, after
reconstruction
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reconstruction,
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 the proportion of 'very dissatisfied'
visitors
 declined two times from 10 per
cent
 to five per
cent
.
According to
 the table, during the year after
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re refurbishment
refrefubrishment
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refrefubrishment,
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 the total number of
visitors
 moved upward significantly from 74 000 to 92 000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor satisfaction
  • facilities
  • accessibility
  • interactive elements
  • visitor feedback
  • aesthetic improvements
  • functionality improvements
  • marketing and advertising
  • special events
  • educational programs
  • engaging environment
  • comfortable environment
  • diverse experiences
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