The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs illustrate the information about various modes of transportation required for children between age group 5-12 to travel to and from school in a country in the year 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, In 1990, walking was the main mode of travel and the use of cars was the lowest. In contrast
to this
, in the year 2010, the car became the most common way and cycling was not much used.
Firstly
, In 1990, walking to the educational center
was around 12 Change the spelling
centre
million
trips whereas
public transport was approximately 10 million
. In addition
, cycling, walking and bus were on an average of 6 million
trips. The lowest percentage was the use of car passengers.
Secondly
, In 2010, due to
the increased use of vehicles, car passengers became the highest about 11 million
while
,
cycling to school was not much into consideration with the lowest 2 Remove the comma
apply
million
. Walking and public transport was
on average between 5-6 Change the verb form
were
million
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