The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table represents information
of
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on
expenditure
in Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey
on three typs
of consumer items in 2002.
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types
Overall
,the category
of consumer goods that all countries
spent most on was food,drinks and tobacco, which was thress
times higher than on the other types of goods.
The lowest spending could be seen in Correct your spelling
three
category
of leisure and education Add an article
the category
category
in all five countries
.The outlay of Turkey
was generally higher than the other four countries
. In terms of food,drinks and tobacco,Turkey
spent the most at 32.14%.The expenditure
of Ireland was also
high 28.91%,compared Sweden
which was the least 15.77%. Spain and Italy spent 18.80% and 16.36% respectively.
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to Sweden
On the other hand
, the lowest expenditure
was in
leisure and education which accounted Change preposition
on
under
5% in all Change preposition
for under
countries
.Turkey
spent most on these items at 4.35% of their national expenditure
which is around double than
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that
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of Spain
Spain
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Spain's
1.98%Clothing
and footwear were the third Correct your spelling
1.98%. Clothing
category
of cunsomer
goods and outlays for those items were between 9% in Italy and 5.40% in Sweden. The national spending in Correct your spelling
consumer
this
area for the remaining countries
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