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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table represents information
of
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on
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 national
expenditure
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 in Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and
Turkey
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 on three
typs
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types
 of consumer items in 2002.
Overall
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,the
category
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 of consumer goods that all
countries
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 spent most on was food,drinks and tobacco, which was
thress
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three
 times higher than on the other types of goods. The lowest spending could be seen in
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category
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the category
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 of leisure and education
category
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 in all five
countries
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.The outlay of
Turkey
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 was generally higher than the other four
countries
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. In terms of food,drinks and tobacco,
Turkey
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 spent the most at 32.14%.The
expenditure
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 of Ireland was
also
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 high 28.91%,compared
Sweden
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to Sweden
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 which was the least 15.77%. Spain and Italy spent 18.80% and 16.36% respectively.
On the other hand
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, the lowest
expenditure
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 was
in
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on
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 leisure and education which accounted
under
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for under
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 5% in all
countries
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.
Turkey
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 spent most on these items at 4.35% of their national
expenditure
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 which is around double
than
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that
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of Spain
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Spain
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Spain's
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1.98%Clothing
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1.98%. Clothing
 and footwear were the third
category
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 of
cunsomer
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consumer
 goods and outlays for those items were between 9% in Italy and 5.40% in Sweden. The national spending in
this
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 area for the remaining
countries
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 averaged around 6.5%

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, turkey, category, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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