The charts below show the annual expenses of the average single person in Canada in 2012 and 2022.

The charts below show the annual expenses of the average single person in Canada in 2012 and 2022.
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The next two pie charts illustrate the portions of five median household expenditures in Canada, namely groceries, rent, health, leisure and transportation in 2012 and 2022.
Overall
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, in both years the most important behaviours were the cost of recreation and leasing, the two had contrasting changes as leisure declined dramatically
while
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rent soared sharply in one decade. The fluctuations in the rest categories are slightly less than 7%. In 2022, the proportion of relaxing expenditure decreased approximately threefold compared to 2012. It sharply drops from 28% in 2012 to 8% in 2022.
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although
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there was a significant shift between 2012 and 2022, chartered spending was followed by healthcare expenditure. It was spent 46% in 2012. It rises considerably from 46% to 55%. The next high percentage of expense was Transportation. it was 7%, its ascent remarkably increased from 17% in 2012 to 24% in 2022.
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, families in 2012 spent less money on foodstuffs and shipments but 10 years
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this
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category rose around 4 y 7% respectively,
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the sector of medical management stayed steady throughout the time and just rose 2% in 2022.
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