The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
The provided maps compare the Islip
town
centre in the future and present,
as well as
, the proposed changes that will take place in the
location
. A number of modifications will be implemented and will be discussed in the lines below.
Overall
, after looking at the changes and modifications, it can be seen that these improvements will be for the well-being of the locals of
this
town
because they will enhance the safety of pedestrians. In the beginning, a new pedestrian lane will be constructed in the north of the shops;
therefore
, the safety of pedestrians will be increased.
Furthermore
, there will be a dual carriageway that will be expanded along the
town
centre's perimeter.
In addition
to that the shops will be relocated to the middle of the
town
and its old
location
will be converted into a car park and bus station.
Additionally
, new residential areas in the northeast and southwest will be built. It is
also
worth noticing that the
location
of the school will not undergo any change.
Finally
, moving to the park,
according to
the provided maps, the size of the park will be reduced,
however
, it will remain at the same
location
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, location with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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