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perspective, there is importance in keeping
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in
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for entertaining and
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aspects.
On the other
others believe it is wrong to keep the animal in
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. In
this
we will discuss both
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.
Regarding
this
issue of keeping
animals
in
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there is some strong opposition against policy-maker as they think it is wrong to keep
animals
in
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cage for amusement or entertainment because they think every creature have
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to be free and
also
they believe that
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animals
belong to nature and they have some needs and desires that they can't reach them in
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for.
For example
, wild
animals
like lion or tiger have
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to hunt their food
this
hunting make them
and
also
their natural instinct.
Consequently
, they think that
this
act is unethical and cruel.
Other
people
think the
zoo
is a good place for family entertainment and
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that let
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ordinary
people
to Change the verb form
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learn and see
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rare species.
this
entertainment can't make money for
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and attract
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touristFix the agreement mistake
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for visitingChange preposition
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.
In addition
, by keeping
animals
in
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we have better
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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to know about
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habitFix the agreement mistake
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,
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instinctFix the agreement mistake
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,
,Change the punctuation
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ability or lifestyle that means we will be able to provide better
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or protection for
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for
animals
that are in
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forChange preposition
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existence.
To conclude
therefore
some
people
believe
that is
immoral to keep
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animalFix the agreement mistake
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in
zooFix the agreement mistake
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only for
humansChange noun form
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advantagesFix the agreement mistake
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.
However
other things
that Correct pronoun usage
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there is a visible positive aspect in
this
issue like amusing
people
or
for Change preposition
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study