Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Infrastructure on public transportation facilities is a major spending worldwide. There is an ongoing debate on

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whether

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the

government

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should allocate their budget

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railways

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compare

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to

roads

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. In my perspective, I

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totally

agreeing

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because of the benefit

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public access and environmental aspects.

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,

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will connect one and the other region more

convenient

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compare

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. Governments should analyse

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about the future public access when comes to infrastructure.

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, in

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countries like Europe, it can be observed that

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were not only in the city but

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around the suburb and province line. By train, MRT, and LRT

people

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can commute easily anywhere.

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, based on my own experience, in

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people

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enjoy

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this

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railway facilities

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it is an economical and effective public transportation choice

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to

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.

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, the reason to allocate the

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expenditure on railway is

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the environmental aspects. Some studies reported that building

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is much more environmental-friendly

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to

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. It is the materials

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, the space

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take, and the sustainability of the facilities are the main factors

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. For

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, in Japan,

railways

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for speed

train

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trains

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can transport mass

people

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to one the other big cities within only an hour to two hours

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to the

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who travel by road. It can be imagined that the carbon gas emission produced by train is far less than private cars when all the community

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with

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their own. In conclusion,

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roads

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are one of the public infrastructures that need to

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, it is

railways

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that the

government

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should allocate their budget

on

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for better public access and environmental

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. I believe that in the future

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government

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governments

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worldwide

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spend more

in

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infrastructure

expenditure

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expenditures

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based on public needs and

its

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apply

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sustainability.