The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
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The bar chart depicts the survey output about
coffee
and tea consumption habits (buying and drinking) in five Austarlian
cities over the Correct your spelling
Australian
last
4 weeks period.
Overall
, the residents prefered
to consume Correct your spelling
preferred
coffee
and tea served at café
s while
the fresh coffee
was the least. In addition
, Sydney residents bought the most fresh coffee
while
that
Correct determiner usage
those
of
Hobart consumed the most Change preposition
in
in
Change preposition
apply
instant
coffee
. However
, people who lived in Melbourne visited café more often compared to 4 others
cities.
In Sydney, the Correct quantifier usage
other
number
of people consumed
fresh Correct pronoun usage
who consumed
coffee
was around 44% while
the number
who bought instant
products was just over 45%. Conversely
, the number
who visited café nearly double
which accounted for 60%. Wrong verb form
doubled
Likewise
, Melboure
had Correct your spelling
Melbourne
similar
pattern, making up Add an article
a similar
to
approximately 47% Change preposition
apply
instant
Change preposition
of instant
coffee
) and nearly a half for and
fresh Correct word choice
apply
coffee
, respectively while
went
to café was about 64%.
Regarding Brisbane and Adelaide, Both cities purchased fresh Wrong verb form
going
coffee
just over one third
. Add a hyphen
one-third
Nevertheless
, the number
of instant
coffee
consumed by the residents and the proportion of visiting café in Brisbane was higher, reaching about 53% and 56% respectively while
Change preposition
in adelaide
adelaide
just under 50%. Change the capitalization
Adelaide
Furthermore
, Hobart showed a huge discrepancy which has
around 37% for fresh Verb problem
was
coffee
consumption while
visiting café was higher, nearly twofolds. This
area also
the
highest Add a missing verb
has the
instant
coffee
consumption, reaching approximately 54%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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