The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing
process
which converting sugar
cane to sugar
. Overall
, the process
of producing sugar
cane consists of 7 stages starting with growing and ending up with drying and cooling.
First of all, sugar
canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
are growing
within 12 to 18 months which height is taller enough, after that the farmers harvest them by using Wrong verb form
grows
tractor
or by themselves. In the third Add an article
a tractor
process
, sugar
cane is crush
in the machine and Wrong verb form
crushed
converting
into Wrong verb form
converted
juice
. The next step named
purifying Verb problem
called
juice
, starting
by putting Wrong verb form
starts
juice
in a limestone filter to fill out the unused elements.
In addition
, after using the filter, juice
is put in an evaporator and heat
to change it into syrup. Wrong verb form
heated
Next,
sugar
crystals are separated from syrup in the
Correct article usage
a
process
called centrifuge. The
final stage, Change preposition
In the
sugar
is dried and cooled within the cup. When this
process
finished
, Add a missing verb
is finished
sugar
is sold and used by people.Submitted by fah on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, sugar, juice with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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