The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the manufacturing

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which converting

sugar

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cane to

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.

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, the

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of producing

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cane consists of 7 stages starting with growing and ending up with drying and cooling. First of all,

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canes

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cane

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are growing

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within 12 to 18 months which height is taller enough, after that the farmers harvest them by using

tractor

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or by themselves. In the third

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,

sugar

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cane is

crush

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in the machine and

converting

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into

juice

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. The next step

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purifying

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,

starting

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by putting

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in a limestone filter to fill out the unused elements.

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, after using the filter,

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is put in an evaporator and

heat

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to change it into syrup.

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sugar

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crystals are separated from syrup in

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process

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called centrifuge.

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final stage,

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is dried and cooled within the cup. When

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finished

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,

sugar

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is sold and used by people.