It has been argued that we are living in a throw-away society in which people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing it. Why has this happened and how can we address this problem?

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problem of

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pollution. Many

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the waste product that they

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world and healthy life. In

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from their waste.

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lot of garbage which they can reuse or recycle.

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average of throwing away

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throwing it. In conclusion,

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level of control.

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