The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times

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The 2 maps illustrate the differences in infrastructure of the town

Nelson

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from the year 2000 until today.

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, there are 3 major improvements made in Nelson, namely extension of public transport, the construction of residential housing, and the rise of hospitality.

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, compared to 2000, The town has renewed the train station and built an extra tram rail which goes from the city

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to the university. It

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eliminated cars and made the car road a pedestrian-only one.

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, it implemented a bicycle renting facility in the city centre. A residential area was built in the North-West of the town and the forest in the North-East made place for a major shopping mall. To improve the hospitality, they set up a restaurant, bars, and clubs near the riverside in the South.

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, a new covered market was constructed and the old market was replaced by a new shop.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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