*Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.* Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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change has disadvantages for the average worker, I am convinced that there are

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more benefits compared with drawbacks. In terms of the negative sides of using

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for

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trend may cause disadvantages for workers. With the development of modern technology, It is a common fact that many industries replaced employees with automatic machines, which enhances their efficiency.

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, the number of farmers and factory workers has constantly decreased.

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, many families have to struggle to make ends meet. Take Fooxbot as an example, Foxconn, a famous company, installed 10,000 Foxbot

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and is expected to add 30,000 more of them each year, which means that a lot of workers will lose their

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because

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have replaced their

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development brings far more positive effects on humans.

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,

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are a huge benefit to

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. Artificial intelligence helps us make better diagnoses and may reduce the risk

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, With robotic surgery, doctors can minimize surgical procedures to be done with more precision and accuracy.

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,

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reduce the workload of humans.

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, the machine is capable of performing intensive human

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and backbreaking tasks.

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, the intelligent assistants will do tedious tasks

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as answering

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, which allows us to do more interpersonal and creative aspects of work.

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, one private hypermarket installed an automated billing system on the counter which is working 24/7 hours. In conclusion, though the dominance of robotic technologies has shortcomings, it still gives humans great assistance in some important aspects like health care and

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