*Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.* Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
In recent years, the robotic machine has increasingly replaced people in
jobs
. In my opinion, although
this
change has disadvantages for the average worker, I am convinced that there are much
more benefits compared with drawbacks.
In terms of the negative sides of using Fix the agreement mistake
many
robots
for jobs
, This
trend may cause disadvantages for workers. With the development of modern technology, It is a common fact that many industries replaced employees with automatic machines, which enhances their efficiency. Thus
, the number of farmers and factory workers has constantly decreased. As a result
, many families have to struggle to make ends meet. Take Fooxbot as an example, Foxconn, a famous company, installed 10,000 Foxbot robots
and is expected to add 30,000 more of them each year, which means that a lot of workers will lose their jobs
because robots
have replaced their jobs
.
However
, this
development brings far more positive effects on humans. Firstly
, robots
are a huge benefit to medical
. Artificial intelligence helps us make better diagnoses and may reduce the risk Replace the word
medicine
at
surgeon Change preposition
of
performs
. Replace the word
performance
For example
, With robotic surgery, doctors can minimize surgical procedures to be done with more precision and accuracy. Secondly
, robots
reduce the workload of humans. In other words
, the machine is capable of performing intensive human labor
and backbreaking tasks. Change the spelling
labour
Furthermore
, the intelligent assistants will do tedious tasks such
as answering email
, which allows us to do more interpersonal and creative aspects of work. Fix the agreement mistake
emails
For instance
, one private hypermarket installed an automated billing system on the counter which is working 24/7 hours.
In conclusion, though the dominance of robotic technologies has shortcomings, it still gives humans great assistance in some important aspects like health care and works
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task response
The essay discusses both sides of the argument and provides a conclusion with a clear opinion.
coherence and cohesion
The essay lacks a clear logical structure with some disjointed ideas.
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The essay demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and lack of precision in word choice.
grammatical range
The essay contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, with occasional errors in grammar and sentence structure.