The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.
The line chart illustrates the stake
price
of four companies from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, Facebook consistently increased, Apple had
dramatically fluctuated during the period, Yahoo had Unnecessary verb
apply
a
negative growth and Google Correct article usage
apply
maintained
flat in these five years.
Facebook started Verb problem
remained
in
the amount Change preposition
apply
of
8,000 in 2011, it had Change preposition
apply
a
steady growth, next Remove the article
apply
year
it became 10,000 and it turned double
the amount in 2016. Apple was 5,000 in the first Wrong verb form
doubled
year
, then
it hit the
peak Correct article usage
a
to
35,000 in the next Change preposition
of
year
. However
, it dropped to 6,500 in 2013 and ended up at 5,500 in the last
year
.
The stake price
of Yahoo was 7,500 in the beginning, it decreased half of the amount in two years, and in 2016 it dropped to about 2,500 which is one-third of the original price
. Apple kept
remained flat in these six years, the Verb problem
apply
price
stayed at nearly 1,000 since the numbers were recorded.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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