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Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

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Nowadays,
friendships
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 are creating our lives. A significant number of people possess quality or complicated
friendships
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. Some people believe that becoming close
friends
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 takes time,
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 others claim that you
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 have a variety of time.
This
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 essay will discuss the qualities of a good friend and
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 state the reasons that could destroy a friendship.
To begin
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 with, everyone needs great connected
friendships
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 throughout their whole life, like at university, in their jobs, in high school, etc. Sometimes a close friend becomes your everything.
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, she or he acts like your mom, dad, brother, or sister; they just want you to be happy. As well, a friend should be able to analyze the situation and help them with whatever they need.
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 to
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, if you have real close
friends
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, they do not judge you when you act or laugh stupid things, and you must do whatever you want.
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, some
friends
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 can make fun of you when you act different or funny. That means they are not your real
friends
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, and you ought to stay away from them.
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, some
friendships
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 are fake, even if you
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 think they are. They smile at your face, or it seems like they want to help you, but they just act like that.
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, you cannot trust someone at your first meeting.
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, if you have online
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,
don’t
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 be close with them
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 the fact that you
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 meet them in real life, you
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 know them, and they
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 know you, so they will tell you
lies
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 about everything or they can want money from you.
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, my brother sent money to a stranger because he needed money, and
as a result
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, he was defrauded.
To sum up
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, everyone needs helpful, supportive, and non-judgmental
friends
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. Unfortunately, not everyone has these abilities, so long story short,
don’t
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 trust every friendship.

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task response
Ensure that your essay directly addresses the qualities of a great friend and the factors that weaken a close relationship. Include specific examples and elaborate on each point.
coherence cohesion
Improve the overall structure and organization of your essay. Connect ideas in a logical manner and ensure that your introduction introduces the main points and your conclusion summarizes them.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more varied expressions to articulate your ideas effectively.
grammatical range
Work on the variety of sentence structures and tenses. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use of articles.

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