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You have got a letter from your pen friend who is going to take an exam soon. She/He feels very nervous about the approaching exam and needs your advice to co.e over the stress. Write a letter to your friend - to wish him/her good luck - to give some tis about how to calm down before and durng the exam - to invite him/her to your country

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Dear Harry, I am writing a letter to wish you
a good luck
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good luck
a bit of good luck
a stroke of good luck
a piece of good luck
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 for your CSS
exam
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. When I received your email I saw that you were planning to give exams in the next month.
However
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, I want to wish you
best
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the best
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 of luck for the upcoming exams.
Besides
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this
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, before appearing in the
exam
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center
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centre
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 you are disturbed. I know the
exam
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 is being tough but you would capable
to pass
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of passing
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 the
exam
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. Since I appeared for the final
exam
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 I was feeling puzzled
that
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about
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 how I would clear the
exam
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. But I
was
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apply
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discussed
with
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it with
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 my tutor he
an
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apply
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advised to me a couple of minutes every day
to practice
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practising
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 mindfulness techniques.
Furthermore
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, setting realistic goals and objectives helps to reduce
you
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your
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 stress. If you practice these strategies before
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exam
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the exam
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 you will feel
relax
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relaxed
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. I would suggest you to please come to my city and enjoy the
ambiance
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ambience
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 so that you feel
comfort
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comfortable
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 before exams. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards,
Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on

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task response
Ensure the letter directly addresses all three points in the prompt: wishing good luck, providing tips on calming down during the exam, and inviting the friend to your country.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate transitions to connect ideas and paragraphs more effectively. Consider restructuring the letter to improve the flow of ideas.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used and ensure that words are used accurately and appropriately.
grammatical range
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and sentence structure to ensure accuracy and clarity in your writing.
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