As technology advances, traveling to space is likely to become an option for holidaysmakers in the future. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of space tourism?
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especially
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space
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it
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the community
a community
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the company
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will increase
people
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.
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money
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the
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people
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apply
some times
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sometimes
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people
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space
tourism is increasing day by day and it Use synonyms
obtain
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provides
people
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the
employment, growth of Correct article usage
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economy
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organizations
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organizations'
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effects
life
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