Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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modern world,
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developing more quickly than past.
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good and bad
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and our
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with others. I think that
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modern
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have more positive effects than
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population
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communication
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everywhere from work to home. Because of overusing
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, there are more introverts than
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decades.
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and meetings with some specific software or videocalls without offline conversation. In my mind, technological development
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both effects,
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bads
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effect of modern gadgets is that, They can help
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us communicate with each other
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online via
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video calls
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and messengers.
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messages
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to everyone in a second from other corner of
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to another. But it may have some negative effects, because of the internet, so many relatives and close friends are not meeting face-to-face
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to be developed year by year
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to create
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easy
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ways to people. But
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are available for offline relationships,
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have to prefer face-to-face
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meetings
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some limits, it would bring more
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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