Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public healthand that other measure are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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people
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exercise
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facilities
can help to increase public health, whilst others think that other factors should be considered too. Use synonyms
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essay agrees that other measures should be taken and not only focus on the Linking Words
number
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facilities
available.
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and facilities
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the
equipment and class sessions are fully provided to aid the activity. Some Correct article usage
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people
believe that Use synonyms
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facilities
should be developed more so that it will increase the health in the society. Use synonyms
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, I disagree with Linking Words
this
opinion as I believe that some Linking Words
people
are not really keen to visit Use synonyms
this
kind of place as they are more comfortable doing workouts at their homes personally. Linking Words
For example
, these days lots of YouTube videos are available for those who are inconvenienced by visiting public sports Linking Words
facilities
. So, just increasing the Use synonyms
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facilities
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the public
has
a healthy Unnecessary verb
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life
.
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exercise
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also
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due to
having a hectic Linking Words
life
and lots of them believe that they do not have time for a workout. Unfortunately, some Use synonyms
people
believe that workouts should be done in an extensive manner and find it is not convenient for them to spend time on that activity. Use synonyms
For example
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people
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exercise
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exercise
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factor of changing societies' mindset regarding Linking Words
exercise
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overall
public health. So, it is not the Linking Words
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facilities
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people
on how important to have Use synonyms
exercise
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To conclude
, The Linking Words
number
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facilities
available does not really affect the Use synonyms
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exercise
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exercise
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