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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides a visual representation illustrating the comparison between a public library building two decades ago and the present time.
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, the central library has experienced dramatic changes
during
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over
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 20 years, one of the main alterations is an increase in the number of rooms
in
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at
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 the present time. In the
last
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center
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centre
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, upon entering
to
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the
center
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centre
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, there were tables and chairs.
In
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On
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 the left
hand
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, two rooms were located at the corners, the northwest and the southwest, the former was CDs, videos and computer games,
while
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 the latter was allocated to newspapers and magazines as a reading
room
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. The corridor between these two spaces was dedicated to
the
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adult
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 fiction
books
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.
On the other
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hand
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, In the right
hand
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, there was a children’s
books
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 chamber in the northeast position which was next to the
adult
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 non-fiction
books
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 area.
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, the enquiry desk was right in the right
hand
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 of the entrance.
According to
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the
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today’s plan, the furniture in the
center
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centre
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are
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is
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 removed. The Northwest
room
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 become larger and not only is allocated to storytelling events and children’s fiction
books
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 but
also
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 is equipped with some
sofa
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sofas
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 for attendance. The reading and children’s book
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room
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rooms
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 are replaced by the computer
room
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 and the lecture place respectively. A new cafe is situated
instead
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 of the enquiry desk and the
adult
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 non-fiction
books
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 part is replaced by the self-service machines, an information desk and
adult
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 fiction
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hand, room, adult, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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