You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • thank your friend for the stay • describe where you left the envelope • ask him/her to return it to you by post

Dear John I hope you and your family are all well! It was so wonderful to spend time with all of you
last
month. It felt great to catch up with you, get to know your children, and have fun together after so long. You have always been dear friends of mine
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and always will be. I want to thank you for the accommodation and it helped me a lot. Because I was in a rush to find a place at that time near to conference hall. I think
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you didn't meet any difficulty because of me. I know your place was overcrowded, but you gave me a chance to stay in your house and I never forget your help. I am writing
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letter for another help. I left one of my important
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in your place, as I remember I put that in the cupboard on
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shelf. I think
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you will be able to find that easily. It was a brown colour envelope and it says my name and address as well. I hope, you can send it to me
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post
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and I will pay for it. You can use the same address as mentioned in the envelope. I have an interview
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next week and I really need that document. I am waiting for your reply, and
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will be really helpful for me. Warm wishes Tom Ferdi
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph discusses a single idea more clearly to enhance readability.
complete response
Provide a bit more detail about the conference or the document to add context and specificity.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are very well done, adding a personal touch to the letter.
suitable writing tone
The tone is perfectly appropriate for the situation—friendly and polite.
logical structure
The logical structure is strong. The letter is generally easy to follow.

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