The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the growing accessibility of low-price
airlines
allows
people
to
travel
to any part of the world. It is argued that
this
is
positive
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a positive
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development for the
people
of middle and
low
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lower
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classes,
whereas
others believe that it can have potential drawbacks associated with overtourism.
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essay will discuss both points of view (perspectives) and
agrees
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that low-cost
airlines
is
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valuable for
people
. One positive aspect is the development of
low cost
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airlines
has increased the accessibility of
travel
for different segments of the population. In the
past
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it was available for
people
of upper-middle classes to
travel
to foreign countries,
however
, with the development of local
airlines
even
people
with
the
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limited budget can afford air
travel
.
For instance
, now Kazakhstanis can fly from Almaty to Dubai for merely $40
and
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making it possible for even students to explore different cultures.
On the other hand
, it is
therefore
argued the rise of local
airlines
has led to overcrowding and over-tourism issues in specific places. The continuous stream of
tourists
into the country can cause a number of problems to local communities
such
as the lack of accommodation, traffic problems in the city, and crime.
For example
, in Istanbul the increasing number of
tourists
that visit iconic sites
such
as
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the Blue
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Mosque and Grand Bazaar has resulted in overcrowding at these places, which makes it challenging for both locals and
tourists
to enjoy these historical sites. Despite
this
, an influx of
tourists
can help to maintain the country's economy. In conclusion,
although
the
low cost
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airlines
can contribute to the issues of overcrowding and over-tourism, it can
also
enable the less affluent part of the society to gain different cultural experiences.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Affordability
  • Global mobility
  • Convenience
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic benefits
  • Cultural exchange
  • Enhanced connectivity
  • Drawbacks
  • Sustainable travel
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