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Some people think that money must be spent on promoting the use of bicycles in cities while others think cities must spend on public transport discuss both views and give your opinion

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Social
media
 addiction 📌 Like other types of
behavioral
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behavioural
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 addictions, using social
media
 can influence
in
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your life.
It’s
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 effects overusing social networking sites can result in many health and personal relationship problems
also
 seen in other addictions. The effects of social
media
 addiction include anxiety or depression. People addicted to social
media
 often experience weak eyesight and migraine The
causes1
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causes
 of social
media
 addiction include addictiveness, stress and self-esteem, and social anxiety. These factors drive a person to continue with the excessive use of social
media
 to clear out unpleasant feelings
Solution1
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Solution 1
 Time must be used efficiently, and parents must explain its harm to their children, and
also
 apply it for the better. The cause 2 Social
media
 use can affect users' physical health even more directly. Researchers know the connection between the mind and the gut can turn anxiety and depression into nausea, headaches, muscle tension, and tremors. Solution 2• Delete your social
media
 apps from your smartphone.Turn off your personal phone during work,
as well as
 during school, meals, and recreational activities.Set aside a certain amount of time dedicated to social
media
 per day. In
conclusion
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 I want to say The effects
from
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 social
media
 are very complex and vary from person to person.
However
 , in the time we’ve had to conduct
research
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 we were not able to find direct and clear causation
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