Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
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task response
Ensure to fully address the prompt and provide a balanced argument.
coherence and cohesion
Organize ideas in a clear and logical manner, with effective use of linking devices.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices to convey meaning.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and strive for more variety and accuracy in grammar.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite