The bar chart shows the distribution of YouTube users worldwide as of January 2023 by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the distribution of YouTube users worldwide as of January 2023 by age group.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the numbers of YouTube users across the world in different
age
group
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in January 2023.
Overall
, it shows that the six groups witnessed contrasting
percentage
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in
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using YouTube during the given time. The data manifested that YouTube was more popular among adults
compare
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to the elderly. In terms of the adults
group
, the
age
of 25-34 peaking at 20% as it
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highest proportion of other groups. The younger adult
group
at the
age
of 18-24 reversed a slightly lower at exactly 16% as it remained the same level of users as the
age
of 25-44 years old. Regarding the elderly
group
, it reveals statistic numbers where the
age
of 45-54 matched 12%
then
gradually dropped to the lowest level in older
age
(55-64 years old).
However
, it increased marginally to around 9% for the oldest
group
at
age
65 years old and above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age group
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • user base
  • demographic
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • trend
  • mid-range
  • teenagers
  • young adults
  • middle-aged adults
  • elderly adults
  • global implications
  • marketers
  • content creators
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