You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two maps show the same
island
while
first
Correct article usage
the first
one
is before and the second one
is after the construction for tourism. Looking first at the one
before construction, we can see a huge island
with a beach
in the west. The total length of the island
is approximately 250 meters. Moving on the
second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the Change preposition
to the
island
. There are two areas of accommodation. One
is in the west near the beach
while
the other one
is in the centre of the island
. Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track. This
track also
goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island
. Furthermore
, tourists can swim near the beach
in the west. A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also
leads to the beach
. Overall
, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after
this
development. Not only lots of facilities are built on the island
, but also
the sea is used for activities. The new island
has become a good place for tourism.Submitted by s_syedy on
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