The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.
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The diagrams describe how the ground floor of the art gallery has transformed since 2005.
Overall
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, the art gallery has undergone a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the development of a lift, the construction of a ramp for wheelchairs and the rearrangement of some rooms. In the western corner, the coffee shop was replaced by the gallery store, with a smaller area than the previous one. The office located adjoining
also
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was knocked down to make way for the occurrence of vending
machine
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. In the west-southern of the diagrams, exhibition room 4 was divided into the children's area and temporary exhibition, which was accompanied by the establishment of the way for wheelchair catering for disabled people.
Whereas
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the positions of the entrance hall and receptionist desk have been moved slightly in the centre of the maps, no change has been made in the main gate.
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, three exhibition rooms are located on the right and the stairs at the top still remain the same.
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