Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
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number of humans
cure
themselves by going to
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using
medicines
were
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was
time
to Change preposition
from time
time
. In my opinion, it is means
negative Change the verb form
means
of
development for Change preposition
apply
country
.
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the country
medicines
make them back to last
century. It can look Correct article usage
the last
how
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at how
people
treat themselves for cure
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cures
from
illnesses using Change preposition
for
herbs
. It because
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was because
of
there was Change preposition
apply
little
amount of Add an article
a little
the little
medicine
and available doctor
in their place. Now, the number of doctor
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doctors
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facilities
hospital
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hospitals
clinic
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clinics
was
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is
village
and big Fix the agreement mistake
villages
city
. The Fix the agreement mistake
cities
medicine
have
many kinds for different kinds of Change the verb form
has
illness
. That can be choice
by the Correct article usage
a choice
doctor
. Moreover
, nowadays there are kind
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kinds
doctor
specialist
that can Fix the agreement mistake
specialists
cure
the
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apply
illness
by their specialist of ill.
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illnesses
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the time
of cure
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a longer Change the verb form
takes
time
. The reason is, herbs
have Correct word choice
that herbs
slow
reaction in Add an article
a slow
cure of
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curing
illness
. It means, somebody
who need more care by their sick need more Correct word choice
that somebody
time
despite the bacteria or viruses spread
in Wrong verb form
spreading
body
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the body
became more sick
. Replace the word
becoming sicker
On the other hand
, the development of medicine
became
more patent and can cut Wrong verb form
has become
of
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off
the
viruses or bacteria Correct article usage
apply
quickly
than Correct quantifier usage
more quickly
herbs
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herbal
medicines
.
On other
hand, Correct article usage
the other
this
can also
have positive development because people
have more knowledge to indicate the disadvantages of chemical medicines
. They do not want the medicines
destroy
the tissues of their body and Add the particle
to destroy
give
side effects for a long Verb problem
cause
time
. It makes people
try to search with their knowledge to
against the bacteria or Change preposition
apply
virus
that spread by using Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
herbs
. Because,
there are many research Remove the comma
apply
also
give advantages by
using Change preposition
to
herb
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
herbs
herbs
became worst
to Correct article usage
the worst
cure
illness
if people
have heavy sick
. Replace the word
sickness
It
is because Correct pronoun usage
This
herbs
not
too qualified and take a Add a missing verb
are not
long
Correct word choice
longer
time
than chemical medicine
. The benefit of herbs
not
as much as chemical Add a missing verb
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is given
doctor
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