Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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professionals should

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their

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, some

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argue that they should be working in the state where they are trained.

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believe that experts should be given flexibility to choose their work

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the prior opinion

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some

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, I believe that

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with expertise should be given

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to choose where to work. On one hand, It is understandable that the quota of university students in some

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is adjusted based on

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needs

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it is important for those who received a degree from a nation to serve back and to feel the job gap.

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, the number of medical students in Indonesian universities each year are limited based on

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need for future doctors,

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upon graduation, they are mandated to work in Indonesian Hospital for

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,

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some drawbacks

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as low

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and limited

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for self improvements for professionals.

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, working in foreign countries can be challenging

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some factors

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as language

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and different bureaucracy,

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, it provides plenty of

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for both experts and the

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it should be allowed.

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, by working

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abroad

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will encounter new challenges. If managed properly, they could lead to

self improvement

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, a high salary

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back to their home countries can

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contributes

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to the state foreign exchange. In Indonesia, foreign workers contribute the highest foreign exchange. In conclusion, though the number of experts already adjusted with

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of students enrolled in universities, working in the same

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does not provide promising

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and access to self-development.

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, it is important to let expert

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to

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choose their working

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as it

bring

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benefit both personally and nationally.