The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The given table illustrates the changes in the ratio of residents aged 65 and over in
Canada
, Germany
, and UK
in the Correct article usage
the UK
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
1988 and 2000, Change preposition
apply
as well as
the foresee in 2030. Overall
, all countries has
Change the verb form
have
underwent
and will experience Change the verb form
undergone
increase
, Correct article usage
an increase
however
the country that has the most aged 65 and over population differ each period.
To begin
with, in 1988, Germany
owned the most elderly aged 65 and above at 20.45, while
Canada
at 16.32 and the UK
at 14.23 percent
. Twelve years later, in 2000, both Change the spelling
per cent
Germany
and Canada
underwent a drastic increase to 25.32 and 20.67 respectively. In contrast
, the percentage in the UK
also
went up but only by less than 1 percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Next,
it is predicted that in 2030, all country
will soar up in Fix the agreement mistake
countries
its
elderly proportion. Correct pronoun usage
their
Germany
will increase to over 30 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
Canada
and the UK
will reach 26.35 and 20.35 respectively. Comparing the data between 1988 and 2030, it is evident that the UK
will goes
through the least changes by increasing only approximately 6 Change the verb form
go
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the other two countries will go up by around 10 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, germany, uk, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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