The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000

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the major reasons individuals frequented a general library in the

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in 1991 and 2000.

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,more users visited to collect and return borrowed books in the two years . On one hand ,it was no news that

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people made use of the study facilities available

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there was a new demand for motion learning which

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caused a decline in reading habits. in 1991, citizens were more interested in hard copies as they borrowed and returned books (65) because of the possible underdeveloped technology, it can

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be seen that there was more consumption of print media (15) even higher than the need to study and obtain information which

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relatively the same (10). As for 2000, the public

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still interested in books but there seemed to be a small decrease

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in 1991 (55) but people soon became more interested in being informed than in 1991 (20)

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, the recent technological advancements of the 2000s encouraged need for videos (18)

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reading of magazines and studying even decreased considerably.

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the amount of male and female in further education in Britain in three different years with ten years intervals,starting from 1970 and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.